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Keep still,
my bitter heart;
it's not bees in my veins
making that hiss,
but denial
and disappointment
and Type 1 Diabetes.
If heartache was sugar-coated,
I'd be in a coma.
I'm a glutton
for dramatic prose,
and keeping my mouth shut
about the things that matter
is second-nature now;
those letters to the man
who gave me half his genes
have gone unsent too long.
I want to ask him
why our relationship
is two-minute phone calls
and filler conversations.
I want to know
why I can't move him
like a daughter should,
but maybe the bees
that aren't really bees in my veins
are right:
Maybe he doesn't want
to see the poet
behind these broken words
because pride
doesn't only hurt
when it's too tough to swallow.
my bitter heart;
it's not bees in my veins
making that hiss,
but denial
and disappointment
and Type 1 Diabetes.
If heartache was sugar-coated,
I'd be in a coma.
I'm a glutton
for dramatic prose,
and keeping my mouth shut
about the things that matter
is second-nature now;
those letters to the man
who gave me half his genes
have gone unsent too long.
I want to ask him
why our relationship
is two-minute phone calls
and filler conversations.
I want to know
why I can't move him
like a daughter should,
but maybe the bees
that aren't really bees in my veins
are right:
Maybe he doesn't want
to see the poet
behind these broken words
because pride
doesn't only hurt
when it's too tough to swallow.
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Written for cahoodaloodaling's first prompt--Self Portrait.
Edited with help from =kersee9.
Submitted to dA 6/14/2012
Edited with help from =kersee9.
Submitted to dA 6/14/2012
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now for some reason, this piece makes me think of eating disorders (probably the wonderful eating/consuming imagery), as if the poor relationship with the father has led to this peculiar relationship with food they both dance around.
i think this is beautiful and highly unusual. the mix of the poetic and...blunt, for lack of a better word, is very striking.
i love the beginning and end, the simplicity of the words belying the intensity of their message. very nice!
i think this is beautiful and highly unusual. the mix of the poetic and...blunt, for lack of a better word, is very striking.
i love the beginning and end, the simplicity of the words belying the intensity of their message. very nice!