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You
talk
to the
stars like they
know what you're saying,
but I think you've forgotten the
stars cannot hear--all your wishes get caught by the moon.
:iconglory-be-project: Day the year is almost over!

This is a Fibonacci poem ( a prompt by ~LockmanCapulet ) and is another prize poem for *Malintra-Shadowmoon

Fibonacci Poems--lines with advancing number of words/syllables: 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13, ... (each # is the sum of the previous two)</span>

December 2013
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hopeburnsblue Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Professional Writer
I love this so much, for obvious reasons, but also because I pay most attention to the moon, since I am more likely to see it than the stars.
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betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconheartglompplz: Thank you, sweetheart! 
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LadyBrookeCelebwen Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, I like this form! You did a brilliant poem with it as well. :D 
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betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! I like this form, too, and hope to do more of them in the near future! :heart:
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LadyBrookeCelebwen Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! I can't wait to see any future ones you write. :D 
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LockmanCapulet Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well done! This is great ^^
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betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!  I really enjoyed this form--I'd never written one before. :heart:
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WorldWar-Tori Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013   General Artist
:wave: Hello, I used this deviation to write this piece :love: Have an awesome day =D
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betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my goodness, thank you so much! :heart:
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WorldWar-Tori Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013   General Artist
You're welcome :love:
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elianoretta Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013
I love this one.  very nice.
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betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart: Thank you!
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rlkirkland Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:clap::clap::clap:
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betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconheartglompplz:
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Malintra-Shadowmoon Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like this one as well. Thank you so much :hug:
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betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome--I'm glad you like it. :heart:
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Malintra-Shadowmoon Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You really have some beautiful ideas and special poetry forms I have never heard of before :)
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betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I loooove learning new things and trying out new forms--they're always a challenge, and I enjoy tackling them. :)
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