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Cinderella

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Slipping winter's shawl
from blossoming branches,
she whistles with the birds.
:iconglory-be-project: Day can we just, like, all take time off (and get paid for it) until after the holidays?

:iconmulthaiku: -- Another entry for my current fairy tales project, in which spring/a tree (Cinderella) sings (enchants?) the birds. Obviously inspired by the scene in the Disney movie where the birds and mice are helping Cinderella dress.

November 12, 2013
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8Volaticus8's avatar
Hi. It's a really beautiful moment and image you've captured here. I like the alliteration; it's not over the top, even for a short poem. I just don't really get the title. The way I read it, this haiku depicts the transition from Winter to Spring, and I don't see where Cinderella fits in there. I'd be happy if you would enlighten me. Thanks for a enjoyable read :)