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A faint flush of blue
crowded by angry coals;
the sky holds her breath.
:iconglory-be-project: Day feeling a bit under the weather. ;) No, really--because it's raining.

June 13th, 2013
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wavesandbreakers88 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Student Writer
Nice imagery! What a fun haiku.
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betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! :heart:
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wavesandbreakers88 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Student Writer
No problem. :)
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maxnort Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013   Writer
wait a moment
here it comes
in the distance
hear her shout
stamp her foot
temper tantrum
and fade away
***
of course, none of this needs to be said.
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betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart:
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Tomea Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013   Writer
this was insanely pretty :) I love the way you wrote this XD
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betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, hon. :heart:
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rlkirkland Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Vivid in color and energy. :)
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betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconheartglompplz:
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