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You left me nine weeks due
undressing poetry.
Like a bad habit,
I found you and I lost you.  Who are you, again?
Ghetto baby,
poets should never make ghost children.
:iconglory-be-project: Day I still need some more admins over at #lacoterie. If you know of anyone, please send them my way!

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Titles used:
    You Left Me Nine Weeks Due
    Undressing Poetry
    Like a Bad Habit
    I found you, I lost you, who are you again?
    ghetto baby
    Poets should never make ghost children.

    July 22nd, 2013
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dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013
Your fantastic work has been featured in Friday Night Features.
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betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :iconheartballoonplz:
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cality Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
What a lovely title poem! The first two lines and the last line in particular I think are very strong. :clap:
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betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this! :heart:
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cality Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure! <3
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pagan-poetess Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Professional Writer
i adore the beginning beyond words :heart:
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:iconbetwixtthepages:
betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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pagan-poetess Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Professional Writer
you're so welcome :)
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kairesdream Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

Speachless.

 

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:iconbetwixtthepages:
betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart: Thank you.
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dietcocaine Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013   Writer
The "ghetto baby" link didn't name properly. Just so you know. ^^;
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:iconbetwixtthepages:
betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for catching that--it's been fixed. :heart:
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dietcocaine Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013   Writer
:)
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xlntwtch Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013   Writer
:+fav: This may the best title poem I've read yet. It's seamless.
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:iconbetwixtthepages:
betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:blush: Thank you, LJ!  I'm glad you enjoyed the read!
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xlntwtch Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013   Writer
I did and do. :heart:
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psithurisms Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
love
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:iconbetwixtthepages:
betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart:!
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LadyBrookeCelebwen Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, this is a brilliant use of the titles! I like this a lot. :D
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:iconbetwixtthepages:
betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, honey! :heart:
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LadyBrookeCelebwen Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconheartglompplz:
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconlovesplz:
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starshinexx Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is gorgeouuss<3 A poem made of titles is a really cool Idea, maybe I'll try it sometime(: But I'm going to guess its harder than it looks, it usually is!  thanks again for using my poem!!!
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betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's a bit difficult the first time or so, but then it all sort of falls into place and you're like OMG why haven't I already done this?!

And it's addictive. :giggle: You're welcome!
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starshinexx Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Then I'm really gonna have to try this soon!
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:iconbetwixtthepages:
betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YESYESYES do eeeeeeeeet!
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
really great string of titles here. they work so naturally well together. 

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betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!

This one took me a few times to get right, but I love how it turned out. :heart:
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, what an awesome piece! :D
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:iconbetwixtthepages:
betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!  Make sure to check out the pieces I used titles from! They're all lovely!
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure! :)

Lol, you must've known I already opened tabs up for those other pieces, huh? :P
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betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:giggle: I must have haha!
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:laughing:
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DamagedHomewrecker Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
absolute perfection. seriously.
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betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:blush: Thank you, honey!
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