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Night is Weeping

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We live in a world of black glass
and lonely thunder,
but this is
an upwards spiral.

The space left behind
the moon near 1 am--
unframed and distorted--
is less than lost,
a terminal darkness.

In sparse clouds,
the white boat stays horizontal.
:iconglory-be-project:

This is a contest prize for AyeAye12, who requested I write a first line poem using the first lines of his and others' work from around dA.

I stole the lines (with a little creative licensing to make them make sense) you see here from these amazing pieces:

Title comes from Night's Rain
Hunting dragons
Poppies
This Is A Poem, ii
The Universe in Your Mind
Untitled
00:58 - 01:10
In Death, I Would Say
Lostless
Iniquities
Universe pronoun (night outside same window)
Bird Feather Falls Peculiarly, July 2014 (8th)

Want your very own first line poem?  Note me!

August 25th, 2014
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AyeAye12's avatar
Ahh, this is wonderful! :tophateager: 
Thank you so much. :huggle: