If you have to ask if there's a beginning, middle and end, you already know the answer.

This does read like a day-in-the-life piece, isn't "bad" and if you're happy with it, that's all that matters. But if you want it to be more of a "legit" story, then there are other questions to be asking: what is the plot, what is the conflict, what is the motivation, what is the resolution. I get there is an attempt to use the daughters in some way -- say if mom and dad came down for breakfast the next morning and mom or dad had a black eye or weird scratch due to their night time festivities but the girls asked if they "got hurt and needed stitches", only to have mom and dad talk themselves into more hypocrisy ("sometimes some scratches don't need stitches"). perhaps a proper ending, if the daughters are indeed old enough to now know better, to have mom and dad sit them down and have a facts-of-life talk. that way the girls learn the truth about things and they can absolve each other of the white lies they've been telling all along.

just thoughts of mine feel free to use or ignore. the story itself is heartwarming and cute and very real. parents want to protect their kids but how much is too much? it raises good questions that are highly relatable in this day and age.