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Redaction Five

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AS children, bid good-night,
put their nightgowns on,
My ribs
peep, and prance again.


AS if ,
Upon the  hem,
a
puzzle
of summer,
of sun,
crowds flowers
of
Eden  in
nothing!


DUST is the only secret.


In town,
Nobody
ever
plays
In
a
Bold,
Swift Fleet,
But
robs the next
Robin
to rest.
This is another redaction experiment.

Completed in Word using the "hidden" tool under the fonts box.

I used three of Emily Dickinson's poems

("As the children bid the guest goodnight,"

"As a little Arctic flower",

and

"Dust is the only secret,")

which can all be found at the following:

[link]

February 2010

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HugQueen's avatar
Oh! It's interesting, it's got a jagged feeling to it. Nifty!



Thanks so much for sharing this piece with our group, #dALinkSystem! ♥