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Redaction Poetry Three

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Love is darkness,
a choice.

The edge of breaking down.

A eulogy.

Lonely
and black
after you.

Washed wounds
of broken
Saints and Sailors.

A lie
of tears,
regret,
and knowing about foolish pride.

And this story
packed no tears.

Baby's gotten good at goodbye.
Attempt number three at Redaction Poetry.

I think I like this one the best so far.

January 2010

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MysteriousBob777's avatar
I like this one the best too. I wonder about what this was before you made a poem out of it, too.