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dear paradise girl:
you have seaweed in your hair
and your eyes are painted with mother-of-pearls.
the sand between your toes
has crusted over
and when i place my head against your chest,
i panic
because i can't find a heartbeat.
and you laugh,
a clogged-up gurgle,
because you know that i've forgotten what you're made of.
you don't have a pulse.
instead,
i hear the rhythm of blue waves beneath your skin.
dear paradise girl:
you have crabs clipped to your earlobes
and you wear seagull feathers for a dress.
there are blue-kelp tattoos across your shoulders
and a ring of suction-cup stars around each ankle,
and when you move,
you move like water.
and when you wrap your arms around me,
i draw back in fear
because your skin molds to mine like mud...
and you grin,
a snaggle-toothed vision,
because you know i've forgotten once again.
your skin is cool and clammy
and i can't stand to hug you
anymore than i can chew on sand.
forgive me.
dear paradise girl:
you're crying grains of salt
and the beads have sliced my fingers.
you wail for hours
about dolphins
and seahorses
and making new discoveries
and i always wonder where you go when you dream.
and honey,
you have to understand:
i've been licking your saltdrops for ages,
but i think i may have finally snapped.
and when i breathe
in the midst of your seaweed-tangled hair,
i smell rainclouds
and damp parchment
and fear...
and if i hold you too closely...
if i snap the twigs of your arms in two...
i apologize.
but you are held together
by wind
and scraps of dull yarn
and a conch shell i used for a heart-holder...
and i'm sorry,
but you don't exist,
really.
forgive me.
dear paradise girl:
i made you up
out of the rhythm of waves
and about twelve unknown objects.
and now,
i've lost you again.
the tide swept you away.
dear paradise girl:
let's try our love once more.
i've been rebuilding you.
rebuilding us.
i promise i'll be gentle.
you have seaweed in your hair
and your eyes are painted with mother-of-pearls.
the sand between your toes
has crusted over
and when i place my head against your chest,
i panic
because i can't find a heartbeat.
and you laugh,
a clogged-up gurgle,
because you know that i've forgotten what you're made of.
you don't have a pulse.
instead,
i hear the rhythm of blue waves beneath your skin.
dear paradise girl:
you have crabs clipped to your earlobes
and you wear seagull feathers for a dress.
there are blue-kelp tattoos across your shoulders
and a ring of suction-cup stars around each ankle,
and when you move,
you move like water.
and when you wrap your arms around me,
i draw back in fear
because your skin molds to mine like mud...
and you grin,
a snaggle-toothed vision,
because you know i've forgotten once again.
your skin is cool and clammy
and i can't stand to hug you
anymore than i can chew on sand.
forgive me.
dear paradise girl:
you're crying grains of salt
and the beads have sliced my fingers.
you wail for hours
about dolphins
and seahorses
and making new discoveries
and i always wonder where you go when you dream.
and honey,
you have to understand:
i've been licking your saltdrops for ages,
but i think i may have finally snapped.
and when i breathe
in the midst of your seaweed-tangled hair,
i smell rainclouds
and damp parchment
and fear...
and if i hold you too closely...
if i snap the twigs of your arms in two...
i apologize.
but you are held together
by wind
and scraps of dull yarn
and a conch shell i used for a heart-holder...
and i'm sorry,
but you don't exist,
really.
forgive me.
dear paradise girl:
i made you up
out of the rhythm of waves
and about twelve unknown objects.
and now,
i've lost you again.
the tide swept you away.
dear paradise girl:
let's try our love once more.
i've been rebuilding you.
rebuilding us.
i promise i'll be gentle.
Literature
sunrise, sunset, unrise, unset
you rise
like a cancerous sun
and orbit away from
me, this, everything
(nothing = synonym)
you set
and you're (g)(one)
for a not-her night
(i need a calendar)
you rise,
swing two steps to the left,
and disappear to your star-
Less skies; no, wait, you've
got a star. but you're apart
of anot(me)her constellation
(please let me eat the moon)
you set
me, UP, (on your pedestal)
TO FA_L
like a chain reaction;
butterfly contraption
(i sink like a domino)
your eyes
follow me.
like a poor trai
Literature
Shadow and Radiance
On the west side of Eden
There is nothing but seven graves;
And in the dust, I hear voices chanting
But no bells ring.
Say it:
O for the radiance of a thousand suns
O I am become death, destroyer of worlds
O O O O
Until the rotting teeth
Fall from Golgotha's empty mouth
And tree's grow in the sockets,
Where pleading eyes
Used to be;
No one will know peace.
I used to bask in
The misty sunset's glow.
But now, even Valhalla's feasts
Seem quiet and empty.
I wonder if I'll ever
Get them right.
No wonder.
No wonder.
No wonder.
Those are pearls that were his eyes.
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Makeshift Symphony
He tied piano strings to his heart,
so that every time it beat
it didn't sound so empty inside.
But the music in his heart
couldnt permeate the hollow air
as the metronome kept time for the clock.
One, two. One, two.
Reedy notes plummeted from his lips as
he made me pluck out Tchaikovsky and Bach
when all I wanted to play was twinkletwinklelittlestar.
"I'm just a little girl."
My fingers tripped and stumbled
and I know that I could never play
as well as he needed me to;
I could never keep his notes
from slipping off the page.
White and black sideswiped my fingers,
as I struck one chord too many.
"I've always wanted to
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dear paradise girl:
i miss you.
Does the rhythm remain the same (or close enough to the same) throughout the piece? Was the imagery overly-done, or does it work for you guys? What about the structure? Most importantly...is the narrative understandable, or lost to too many weird word-choices?
february 2010
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PLEASE check out:
Fragments of Paradise
by
andandand
Through Your Eyes
by
i miss you.
Does the rhythm remain the same (or close enough to the same) throughout the piece? Was the imagery overly-done, or does it work for you guys? What about the structure? Most importantly...is the narrative understandable, or lost to too many weird word-choices?
february 2010
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
PLEASE check out:
Fragments of Paradise
by
andandand
Through Your Eyes
by
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Cute title and marvelous poem.