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Marlboro Wishes

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I watch pebbles send ripples dancing
across the half-congealed sludge
of a gas puddle left behind
by a nondescript driver
in a badly painted pickup
picking cigarette butts out of the ashtrays
in this abandoned parking lot.

You study me with steady eyes
over horn-rimmed glasses
and lips lined a working-girl red;
in a fit of inspiration,
I let the puddle settle
and tell you
I've been skipping wishes
across the aurora borealis
hoping for a break.

Before you drive away,
taillights red beneath a red light,
you strike a match across the dash
and hold it to your Marlboro Red.

Take a drag, working girl,
and leave it still-smoking for me.
:iconglory-be-project:

This is a contest prize for DrippingWords who requested I write a poem about the aurora borealis.

This is.... sort of about that? O.o I hope she likes it anyway.

November 5th, 2014
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haphazardmelody's avatar
This is just amazing. Such a different take on wishing than I was expecting in those last two lines.